I like it
5/5 and 8/10
It seems somewhat generic at the beginning (that's not always a bad thing) but still has it's own spices, so it's familiar AND unique in that sense. The 2nd half seems a bit overly compressed, and lost all of it's dynamics. The drums seem to have too much of an affect on the rest of the mix. My only suggestion is to tweak the higher levels and midrange on the master channel EQ for a bit more clarity and "air", and turn down the lowest frequencies on the drums just a bit, and then compress or limit the drums separately (with a short decay) so that the volume levels of your drums are still loud but they don't overpower everything else in the mix. I hope my sincerity isn't discouraging, I figured you would get more out of this review if I just honestly stated my point of view.